[DRABBLE] Making Love
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thesecretdoorPairing: JunDa
Rating: NC-17 I think...
Word Count: 259
Disclaimer: I don't own them sadly...
Ueda Tatsuya likes having sex, of course he does, it’s natural. He’s had sex with a lot of people too, in a lot of different ways. He’s no stranger to drunken one night stands, or random fumblings after hours with random people in the Jimusho, and he’s played around with positions and all manner of weird kinks. He likes having sex very much.
But he likes it best when it’s like this, with no other than Taguchi Junnosuke, when he’s laying on his back, the other man pushing into him slowly, lazily even. Time stops. He can forget everything but this moment, feel nothing but the man above him, all around him, showering his face and neck in the sweetest, most gentle of butterfly kisses. He allows his fingers to flutter along the skin of Junno’s back and sides, to dig in momentarily as his climax sneaks up on him, tearing through him with a force and pressure that can be paralleled only by the swelling of his heart as Junno tangles his fingers into his hair and kisses him directly, whispering comforting words against his lips. Once the tremors fade he allows himself to sink back into the blissful haze, breathing returning to a deep steady rhythm. He reaches a hand out to cup Junno’s cheek, and the man responds by looking deeply into his eyes for a few moments before leaning down to claim his lips again in a kiss that says more than words ever could.
Ueda Tatsuya likes having sex, but he loves making love.
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Ok this was quite short and random, but it just popped into my head of nowhere so I thought I'd better write it down XD
Ratings have me pretty confused though, I get that NC-17 is more adult-themed than R, but at what point do you draw the line? If anyone can shed any light on this I'd be really grateful.
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Date: 2012-01-12 03:16 am (UTC)Told yah I'm more of a sucker for drabbles ^-^
Ahem - you have a way with words my dear and I like the fluffy gesture behind it all >.<
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Date: 2012-01-12 10:27 am (UTC)Thank you for your lovely compliments! Was this level of smut ok? Still a bit much? Do let me know, I want to write things that everyone can enjoy XD
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Date: 2012-01-12 11:59 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-01-12 11:26 am (UTC)^^
this is rated NC-17 though... R is something more restricted... something involving BDSM or PWP...
if i'm not mistaken there is one community that specializes in rating fics... i cant remember though... i'll get back to u if i found them back...
atm, thanks for sharing this~
it's just too sweet for a sweet couple~~ ^^
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Date: 2012-01-12 10:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-05-07 09:41 am (UTC)Thank you for clarifying though I'll keep it in mind!
Oh, one more thing, one website was saying that even if it's kind of vague, if there's any kind of description of an orgasm then it should be NC-17. Is that right? Or would this fic have been ok to rate as R in your opinion?
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Date: 2012-05-07 10:28 am (UTC)Thank you for your help :)
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Date: 2012-01-12 01:03 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for sharing!! *w* And about the NC-17 and R thing...as far as I know people tend to use both as if they were the same but I'm not too sure about it...safest thing to do is just put NC-17 for any sex related thing??
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Date: 2012-01-12 10:57 pm (UTC)Good idea for the rating thing, I think I will just use NC-17 to be on the safe side!
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Date: 2012-01-12 11:05 pm (UTC)ME APPROVED!!!!!! woehvsjdfghe *dies* your way with words is amazing!!!!
more importantly - JUNDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Date: 2012-01-14 12:47 am (UTC)I'm so happy you liked it!!! I'm a fan of your writing too!
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Date: 2012-05-07 09:46 am (UTC)I love reading real 'tugs at your insides' romance, but I'm really not good at writing it at all >_< I find it MUCH easier to write smut (whether I'm better at writing smut than fluff I couldn't say, but I find it easier at least)
Looking for inspiration?...For a certain sequel maybe? >_< sorry - I'll stop hounding so much you about writing it if I'm too annoying!!
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Date: 2012-05-07 10:29 am (UTC)We totally should team up ^_^ I can write the smut and you can make it sweet!! Lol
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